Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Joshua's Disgusting dinner recount

The Curse of the Kumera and Pumpkin

 When I was at home yesterday, I had the most disgusting dinner ever. It smelt like vomit.

 I was outside and a smell struck right into my mouth. Oh no! I think it is our dinner cooking. 

 As I opened the door in the dining room, the smell got stronger and stronger. Then I sat down in the dining room.

 My mum slopped a big plate of kumera and pumpkin. I slowly put it right in to my mouth. Finally I ate it. 

 I felt something weird coming out of my mouth. I vomited right onto my mums floor. Eww!

10 comments:

  1. Unknown26 February 2014 at 10:50

    This is a good recount Joshua. I like the phrase, "a smell struck right into my mouth."

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  2. Anonymous26 February 2014 at 10:53

    I liked your beginning.

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  3. Unknown26 February 2014 at 17:06

    Josh your piece of writing is fantastic.

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  4. Annalena26 February 2014 at 17:07

    Josh your piece of writing is fantastic.

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  5. anna26 February 2014 at 18:38

    nice story Joshua

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  6. Gemma27 February 2014 at 17:21

    Great story Joshua.

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  7. Anna28 February 2014 at 18:19

    I really enjoy your story Joshua its great

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  8. Amy5 March 2014 at 18:21

    Kumera and pumpkin are good for you Joshua!!!!!! Great story!!!

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  9. sam10 March 2014 at 16:34

    I like your story joshua

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