Wednesday 19 February 2014

Writing

We are writing recounts 

in our class.   Currently, 

we’re writing about our 

most disgusting dinner.


Here is a taster of some of the great writing coming out of our class.

The smell dived under my door and my mum called me to dinner. 
- Carlos

Last year, as I sat down at the table, I could smell something horrible. My heart sunk as I recognised the smell. Carrots! My worst dinner ever. - Kahu

Arrgh! What’s that revolting smell? I hope it’s not dinner. The smell got stronger and stronger. I walked to the dining room. It was yams. - Jordan


Yuck! What is dad cooking for dinner? As i walked into the dinning room, the smell got stronger and stronger. Oh no! It’s tomatoes and vegetables. - Cate

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