Sunday 2 March 2014

Writing - Adding conjunctions


We are learning to add conjunctions to simple sentences to make complex sentences. Mr Davidson gave us the sentence, "The mighty gorilla gazed into the distance." We added a conjunction to add more detail about the main idea of the sentence.


Here are some examples:
The mighty gorilla gazed into the distance until he saw food to eat. - Wyatt


The mighty gorilla gazed into the distance until dawn arrived. - Gemma

The mighty gorilla gazed into the distance as he chewed a piece of grass. - Cate

The mighty gorilla gazed into the distance while eating his food. - Luukas

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